Friday, 6 June 2014
My Writing Of My Favourite Person!!!
Writing sample term 2 2014 28 may.
My Favourite person. When my Mum goes to a dinner she always look like a flower rising up.
And her hair is long and black. She is big, pregnant and amazing and she is my favourite person and when I am still sleeping she comes and wakes me up.
When I am sick she takes me to her work and tells me to go sit down and I will go and buy you KFC or Mcdonalds. And when it’s Saturday she takes me to my rugby game and when I get there she makes me not afraid and tells me" Don’t be afraid just play hard”.
And when my games finish she says
“ well done son” and
when I get home my Mum says “go and read the bible and then you can go shower and go sleep. And when I go to sleep my Mum get’s a big blanket and covers me with it.
This is my writing sample I did and it is all about my favourite beloved mom!!! I love you mum!!!!
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you put in lots of vocabulary and wonderful words about your mum it reminds me of my mum.
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